My book! - Comments

View previous topic View next topic Go down

My book! - Comments

Post  HawkBlade on Thu Feb 23, 2012 9:22 pm

Here is the thread that you can comment/suggest on my book.
avatar
HawkBlade
Moderator
Moderator

Posts : 1624
Join date : 2010-02-03
Location : home sweet home

View user profile

Back to top Go down

RE: My Book -Comments

Post  SniperInYourMidst on Sat Feb 25, 2012 7:50 pm

Ooh, this looks like it will be a cool book! Can't think of a good name as of yet, but I imagine that once more of the story is written, someone will think of something. What a Face

_________________
SniperInYourMidst

Behold! The power of CAT5e!
avatar
SniperInYourMidst
Admin
Admin

Posts : 1415
Join date : 2010-02-02
Age : 22
Location : Earth, Milky Way Galaxy

View user profile http://glenn.hannold.us/

Back to top Go down

Re: My book! - Comments

Post  HawkBlade on Sat Feb 25, 2012 8:06 pm

kk glad you like it! As of yet I have 3 and 1/2 pages written
avatar
HawkBlade
Moderator
Moderator

Posts : 1624
Join date : 2010-02-03
Location : home sweet home

View user profile

Back to top Go down

MOOORRRREEE!!!

Post  AgentE382 on Tue May 01, 2012 5:19 pm

Ahem... BOOOOOKKKKK!!!!

So, where's the rest?

One comment: You've got slightly too many subject openers. The setting paragraphs could be written in a more engaging manner.

Other than that, it looks good. Keep it up! Very Happy
avatar
AgentE382
Admin
Admin

Posts : 27
Join date : 2010-02-05
Age : 22
Location : You don't need to know.

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: My book! - Comments

Post  HawkBlade on Fri May 04, 2012 4:14 pm

I've stopped writing it. I realized that I just can't get the hang of putting in a ton of flowery details and such to fluff it up. However, I was thinking we could use the world as a new RPG! What do you guys think?
avatar
HawkBlade
Moderator
Moderator

Posts : 1624
Join date : 2010-02-03
Location : home sweet home

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: My book! - Comments

Post  AgentE382 on Wed May 09, 2012 4:58 pm

I like the idea. But, I went first. Hey, we could do both! Just put up a poll in the Roleplay section and I guess whichever one gets the most votes wins! Unless, of course, everyone wants to do both, which is what I'd vote for.
avatar
AgentE382
Admin
Admin

Posts : 27
Join date : 2010-02-05
Age : 22
Location : You don't need to know.

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: My book! - Comments

Post  Sponsored content


Sponsored content


Back to top Go down

View previous topic View next topic Back to top

- Similar topics

 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum