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My book! - Comments
Here is the thread that you can comment/suggest on my book.
HawkBlade- Moderator
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RE: My Book -Comments
Ooh, this looks like it will be a cool book! Can't think of a good name as of yet, but I imagine that once more of the story is written, someone will think of something.
Re: My book! - Comments
kk glad you like it! As of yet I have 3 and 1/2 pages written
HawkBlade- Moderator
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MOOORRRREEE!!!
Ahem... BOOOOOKKKKK!!!!
So, where's the rest?
One comment: You've got slightly too many subject openers. The setting paragraphs could be written in a more engaging manner.
Other than that, it looks good. Keep it up!
So, where's the rest?
One comment: You've got slightly too many subject openers. The setting paragraphs could be written in a more engaging manner.
Other than that, it looks good. Keep it up!
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Re: My book! - Comments
I've stopped writing it. I realized that I just can't get the hang of putting in a ton of flowery details and such to fluff it up. However, I was thinking we could use the world as a new RPG! What do you guys think?
HawkBlade- Moderator
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Re: My book! - Comments
I like the idea. But, I went first. Hey, we could do both! Just put up a poll in the Roleplay section and I guess whichever one gets the most votes wins! Unless, of course, everyone wants to do both, which is what I'd vote for.
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